5:30 p.m. - 2003-11-17
aroused
AROUSED!
Currently listening to: Yellow, by Coldplay.
Okay, so I lied. I was going to wait until December to go off hiatus, but I'm bored and it's raining and everyone knows that when it's raining and it's rush hour in Austin, you stay home and do reviews.
Anyway.
I don't like this layout. I like it about 5000% more than I did the last hideous layout you had. Thank Christ you got rid of that thing. But this one, while not equally as bad, is still bad. You have some kind of weird thing going on with your links and the way they're highlighted or something. You might want to check that out, it's a little annoying at times.
I didn't really get into the content that much, to tell you the truth. You are 17, and I dunno.. I'm really feeling the age difference there. I'm only 7 years older, but I don't feel you. I don't feel what you're going through, even though you have it right there, out in the open for me to see.
I'm not one of those reviewers who goes on and on about EMOTIONS and how important they are to display, but if I were, I'd say that you have that part down. I see your emotions, you are really good at showing them to us. I'm finding it hard to really say what I don't like about this diary, but there was just stuff I didn't like. You seem a bit spiteful at times, which turned me off. I guess I like a little humor with me diaries, too. This wasn't too humorous. Just straight out emotions, really. Which isn't bad, it's just not my style.
I did like some of your entries. I really liked this one. I kinda lived vicariously through you on that one. I liked this one because it reminded me of Tom's Diner by Suzanne Vega for some reason.
I also thought your little "parting words" thing at the end of each entry is a little cheesy and unnecessary, but hey, whatever blows your skirt up.
I give you a N for Nice Try, but Not My Thing.
