3:46 p.m. - 2004-05-11
blueiceflame
Next we have us some Terra.
I wasn't sure what I was going to think about this journal, but the consenus is that I dig it. Seriously? If I had a journal and I was 16, I would write in a very similar way. That's not particularly good or bad, it's just a fact.
Let's first talk about your boy situation. Ahhh, Jeff. This entry really showed me that while you are totally and completely in love with him, you do know that things can go wrong. And I'm really glad you know that, because you're young, and however old he is (I'm thinking he's older, with having a daughter and such), and I know you're looking forward to getting married and stuff but I really need to warn you to BE CAREFUL! Because IF this ends, you will be so completely devastated and that will not be good. So, that's uplifting, isn't it?
Moving on. I really kinda like your poems.. probably because, again, they remind me of something I would totally write at 16 years old. And sometimes you do get so dayloggy that I'm like, "Lordy, does she have to tell us EVERYTHING?!" But I do see tons of potential in your writing, especially recently. You have it in you, I can see it. Just keep writing, because someday you're going to rock.
This made me smile because that same thing happened to me at the car wash. We made out because neither one of us had made out at a car wash before. Hey, works for me.
Your template is a little too pink, but I think it works for you. Maybe it's a little too teenish for you and you could try something darker, but then again, this is what you found after looking forever.
So, yeah. I looked past the normal teen angst stuff and I can see that you have tons of potential. Just be careful with this boyfriend of yours. Also, you're really cute. Just so you know.
Anyway, I give you a 94.
