3:30 p.m. - 2004-06-29
Bree
BREE!
Oooh, man alive do I just HATE your layout. Seriously.. this is not something that appeals to me AT ALL. The box for your text is so small and smushes your entries up so that when you have a looonnggg one like this makes it all annoying and I'm not even going to attempt to read it. The colors are kinda ugly too. I'd be more into it if the background was black, but that's just me.
Now that we have that out of the way...
You have about 4,563 entries, and no, I didn't read all of them. I read all of this year, a good majority of last year's, and a couple from 2002 and 2001.
In summary: good stuff.
This is one of your first entries and I'm really glad that I didn't have to review a whole diary full of that kind of thing. But I really liked this one, which was also a really early entry, so I'm not sure if I can really say that you have changed your writing drastically. I guess that means that you're just a good writer and that kind of thing doesn't really change with time.
Your more recent entries are pretty boy-intensive. I have to say that this was one of my favorites, because of the meeting your soulmate at such an early age thing. I do admire you for that; it does seem like you two have it together. It's nice to read about, not to mention interesting, but I'd like to see a little more variety every now and then.
I also really liked this one because it seemed like such a departure for you. It doesn't seem like the topic of sexuality is a big one in your journal, so that was different.
You do write beautifully, but I don't think I'd return because I did find it to be a little.. boring. Not really my tastes, to be honest. And through all the templates I saw, none of them ever appealed to me. But that's okay! The point is that you write beautifully and intelligently, and that's probably all that matters.
I give you a 94.
