2:08 p.m. - 2004-06-28
exhausted-faith
EXHAUSTED-FAITH!

You, my dear, are a review whore the likes of which I've never seen before! And this is coming from a reformed review whore myself. I mean.. I just don't get it. Is it just to pimp yourself out or what? You forgot to add that to your addictions page.

Well, I guess it's my turn now!

I didn't really enjoy your diary that much, to be honest. Let's start with this entry, which featured the lively quote:

"I don't really know what the picture shows, two guys kissing each other maybe? Don't worry, I'm not a gay or anything, just that I found the image fascinating, and the words are kind of...I don't know..."

Oh, so you're not a gay or anything? I am SO GLAD you cleared that up, because it was REALLY bothering me.

*rolls eyes*

I myself am notorious for writing novel-length entries, so I was taken aback by how short most of yours are. I don't feel like I can get into a diary that has teeny tiny little entries filled with "deep thoughts" and stuff that looks like you got out of a book of cliches.

Like:

"Something drove my innocence away as i walked into the world of hypocrisy."

Ooohkay.. care to expand upon that thought?

To be fair, that's a lot of your older entries. The newer entries do actually have length and substance, so at least you're trying to get something going on here.

This was the only entry I felt I could relate to, but man did I feel what you were writing there. I guess that's the problem.. we are in different places in our lives, and I found your more contemplative entries to just kinda be annoying at this point. This annoyed me merely because you referred to yourself in the third person the whole time. I am easy to annoy, less easy to impress.

Out of the millions, this was definitely my favorite layout of yours. I really dig your design site, too. But I really liked the colors in the picture and the person looks really rock-starrish to me.

I could go on, but I think we all know the point: I didn't like it and I probably won't return. It's not for everybody, but I do see the appeal to some people. You are a good writer and I see potential in not only your diary but you as a person. You're gonna go on to bigger and better things, not just NeoPets and review whoredom.

I give you a C.

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