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3:48 p.m. - 2004-05-24
expendableme
EXPENDABLEME!

Currently listening to: The Blues, by Guns N Roses

From your bio we learn that you love comic strips, you're a procrastinator, and you love chocolate and hate bimbos.

Okay then. I'm not really sure how I feel about this one. I read a good number of entries, all of this year and then a lot of "randomness" and I still don't really have much of an opinion on it. It's "cute." That's really all I can figure out from it.

Like, I do agree with you on some stuff. I enjoyed your Coldplay entry a lot because I too love me some Coldplay. I enjoyed this one because it reminded me of having a core group of friends and all the drama that entails. But then I get to an entry like this that talks about how your cousin cuts his food, and I'm all "What's the point here?" and I get all bored.

I like that you have so many extras and other stuff to play with. It's a highly functional diary, and there's not a whole lot of spelling mistakes and/or bad grammar, so good for you with all that. I know you're a good writer, as displayed in entries like this, but I wasn't really intruiged by any of your entries. You didn't have my tongue hanging out, salivating all over the place. There wasn't much entertainment.

I also pretty much hate your layout. It would be kinda neat if it wasn't white, but it is white, and I don't like it at all. The colors are yuck together. But that's just my opinion.

There is potential here, but you've had this journal for so long that I don't think you're going to change now. So, keep doing what you're doing if it works for you. It just wasn't very interesting to me.

I give you a B.

 

 

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