9:42 a.m. - 2003-12-23
flufflebunny
FLUFFLEBUNNY!
I have to say, I really.. REALLY don't like this layout. The colors are cute. The picture at the top is cute. But the box where the entry goes is really distracting. I had a hard time reading the content because it's so spread out and hard to read. And that's a shame, because the content that I actually read was pretty interesting.
Let's just try making the box smaller, or the picture at the top smaller so making the text box would be easier to make smaller, or something. That made no sense. But what I'm getting at here is that you write really short sentences instead of paragraphs, and that doesn't work with this kind of layout. It just doesn't. A good example of that is this entry, which is quite long. I skipped around A LOT because it was just too long and weird looking.
Also, sweetie? Archiving your old entries would be a fantastic idea. Look into it.
Unfortunately, the layout really did take away from the content. What I did read, I liked. I was interested in your relationship with your mom, because she knows about your diary and she designs websites and such. I think that's really cool for some reason.
I think I might have rather reviewed this diary. Wow! Hot stuff.
I really liked this entry about your love of music. It shows that you're quite intelligent about these things and don't just like one kind of music genre. I like that.
All in all, I find this diary to be quite cute. I would definitely return if you changed the layout because I am interested in your life. Yay!
I give you an A-. Change the layout!
