4:23 p.m. - 2004-04-01
girlie03
Hi, Danielle. Guess what? I read your whole diary. Isn't that exciting?
I wasn't meaning to reading the whole thing, but I read this one review and was so intriuged that I, too, had to read the whole thing.
I followed you through:
a. Your very first entry where you thought you might be pregnant;
b. You and Aaron splitting up;
c. You finding out that you were pregnant;
d. You meeting the perfect guy and what that was like;
e. Your baby being born;
f. Your engagement;
e. And finally.. the marriage.
Damn woman! I've had my diary for 3 years and can't even come close to comparing to that.
But really, all in all, no complaints. At the beginning of your diary, you had lots of.... ellipses like this... but I think you've somewhat gotten over that. Sometimes the fact that you talk about 100 different things at the same time bothered me a little, but most of the time, that's what I liked the most about this diary. You also have awesome grammar and spelling, like for example in this entry, where, like most of them, there's little to no problems with that kind of stuff. Good job with that.
It was very heartfelt and genuine and honest, and I loved that. You don't give us bullshit, you tell the whole story. You have been through so much in such a short time, and I think you've handled it all well. One thing I couldn't get past is the fact that Aaron just disappeared from your life, like he never even had a damn kid with you or something. What a quality guy that dude turned out to be.
Anyway, I wish you luck with your marriage and your life because you deserve it. I give you a G for GENUNINLY GOOD AND HEARTFELT. Yay!
