9:19 a.m. - 2004-06-22
Imperfuktion
IMPERFUKTION!
I found it incredibly hard to get into your diary at all. Sorry, but I just didn't get it.
I found a good portion of your entries to be filled with cliches, and that irritated me. It was like you watched a whole bunch of TV sitcoms and wrote down what you saw on them. It was just.. lame.
Here's an example:
"Today, I painted my world shades of blue.
Blue is one of my favourite colours and ironically, it is how I'm feeling now."
I mean, come on. Let's have some originality here.
Despite my total boredom, I did sort of like your little ant poem. I also liked this one because it showed genuine love and concern for your friend.
However, I did see a lot of entries like this one, where I wondered what the point was and why we had to know that.
I didn't dig it. I really liked your layout, though. It fits you and I like the colors and such. Yay for the template, boo for everything else.
I give you a 73.
