10:46 p.m. - 2004-07-22
Inspiredmuse
INSPIREDMUSE!
Your diary makes me feel squishy, because I don't really know what to say about it. For the most part, it had me rolling my eyes in a "ohkay, whatever" kind of way, but also.. I read a big chunk of it and it was almost like I couldn't get enough of it. Maybe like a car accident... you want to look away but you can't. Or, maybe not.
I do have to hand it to you, though. You are brutally honest, even if you know it's capable of turning people off. That story about your sister's boyfriend kinda horrified me, and what horrified me even more was how your attitude was really solely based on YOUR feelings alone. Comfort her? Why comfort her when that would get in the way of how YOU feel? So, yay with the brutal honesty, I guess.
Your diary was big on the cheese factor, I'm sorry to say. The fact that you first started your reading career with a romance novel didn't surprise me.. with lines like this..:
"I hesitantly directed the jet of water at my pulsing center, feeling the pressure mounting. All of a sudden my young body started convulsing in wave after wave of pleasure."
.. it was obvious you would have had some cheese factor influence.
The way you narrate your stories with "quotes" and the way you have to tell us exactly what everyone said verbatim really kinda drove me nuts. A good example is your latest entry, while mainly consists of dialogue during a fucking racquetball game. Great, fascinating. Can't you just give us a damn summary instead of telling us EXACTLY what was said? And this one about your yahoo account.. I probably could have done without that entry at all, much less every single detail of every single action.
All in all, your diary was enjoyable purely for the eye-rolling effect. If it makes you feel better, I've never quite read a diary like this before.. it's different, and not exactly in a good way. So at least you get points for originality.
I give you a few books by Stephen King so you can get all that romance crap out of your head.
