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3:38 p.m. - 2004-06-10
irishblueeyes
IRISHBLUEYES!

Currently listening to: Unforgiven, Metallica

First things first: I think your layout is WAY too crazy. I personally think that the links, extras and friends should go on a different page. I mean, you have 1000 people under the "friends" thingie and I think that really clutters it up. Although in your case, since you do seem to have a lot of D-land friends, that might be appropriate. Still cluttery though.

There's at least one random spelling mistake in pretty much every single one of your entries. I know that's not a big deal, but I notice it, and it seems like it would be easy to fix.

As for the content, you are a very detail-oriented person! And not that it's a bad thing, but it did make your entries longggg, and I found myself just barely even looking at some of the longer ones.

Truthfully, I found the entries where you're lamenting about life and the joys and tears more interesting than the ones where you're obsessing over Ryan Adams and the countless other people/things you're obsessed with.

For example, I think your great appreciation for music is really cool and a real good quality, however, I enjoyed your entry on wanting to accomplish things where your talent lies, and thought it was really much more interesting and insiteful.

This was my favorite, just because I know exactly what you're talking about. Not exactly, because you have marriage and the kid and everything, but I feel like I missed out on the middle stuff too. And it haunts you, and there's absolutely nothing you can do about it but make yourself happy right now.

Your entries are just so long and I admit that I probably didn't even get around to reading half of what you have here. I'd probably check back in to see how it's hanging, because I'm rooting for you. It's not often that I see a 25-year-old who has been married for 4 years with a cute little daughter! And it's even less often that I find someone like that who talks about something other than their husband and child. So, good for you with all the outside interests and such.

I give you an 85.

 

 

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