1:11 p.m. - 2004-04-22
jessnichole
JessNichole
Well, what can I say? You write like a teenager. You have teenage issues and write about them in a teenage way. I mean, that's not to say that you suck or whatever, it just means that I really wasn't all that interested. I did read your whole diary, however. So it didn't bore me enough to stop reading.
Like, a casual reader probably doesn't care much about your school rants, but then again, I can see they're important to you and you'd want to write about it. I think maybe this diary is probably more theraputic for you than it is interesting for us.
Also, sometimes it was just annoying. I'm glad you and your mom think so highly of your writing and all that, but there's a line between bragging and just flat-out being a pretensious butthead. And you were riding that line very closely.
You grandpa just turned 59? My DAD is 59. That's just weird.
And sometimes it seems like you were battling between your depression and your taste for unbelievable peppiness.
I know and understand your issues with your weight because I have them too. I wish you good luck with that.
Also.. your layout SO doesn't fit you. And it's white. Me no like.
So I guess I wasn't overly impressed. You're a good writer, I agree with that. And I think you're using your potential, so I don't really have any suggestions. Just keep doing what you're doing.
I give you a college scholarship and a pat on the back.
