1:11 p.m. - 2004-04-16
justmaybe
Justmaybe
I'm just going to get simple for this one.
Layout: It's okay, I guess. I prefer your other one but hey, whatever blows your skirt up. Everything works, so yay for that.
Content: *shakes head*... I didn't "get" this one. I mean, I got it. Because it was all right there in front of me to get. But I didn't dig it. You don't update much, so it only took a few minutes to read the whole thing. It was just.. boring. And young. Like, this. Anyone can write that. I wrote something like that when I was 13. If you're going to do poetry, go all out.
Another good example is this crappola. Can't you like.. call people and tell them about this stuff? Or like, write it in a paper diary or something? Because the casual reader like me really couldn't give a flying rat's ass about your friend's love lives. Sorry.
I just might steal this someday, though.
This was the only entry I really got into, because I think a lot of us in this world have been through something like that. It hurts. And it sucks.
Some comments: I don't know why you chose to make some entries private and some not. The entries you made private weren't earth shattering or anything.
I mean.. it wasn't horrible, it just wasn't interesting to me. ME! Just one chick. It probably is interesting to other people, though.
The verdict: Bleh. I give you a 67.
