2:19 p.m. - 2004-06-15
Kait77
KAIT77!
I am really sorry to say this, but your diary was a big giant mess of boredom.
I don't really see why you think almost any of this information is interesting for the rest of us. It seems like all you talk about is your classes and all the papers you have to write, or your quest for weight loss. Don't get me wrong, I can appreciate your quest, as I am on that same path. But LORDY! Please stop beating everyone down with this incessant chatter!
Every diary has a pointless entry or two, but yours just seems to be full of them! An example of your typical entry is this one. Class, cooking, exercise, hubby, more class. It was just.. not good.
And please, woman.. haven't you ever heard of PARAGRAPHS?! I hope that you have a spell check and grammar check for all those papers you're turning in. I didn't even TRY to read entries like this one with the whole no paragraph crap. My eyes.. ouch.
To be honest, I really didn't see much potential with this one. If you at least tried to use decent grammar and spelling, if you talked about something else besides your grades and your weight, and if you maybe tried to not daylog so entirely much.. maybe. But I don't see it.
I'm sorry to be such a bitch, but this was just not an enjoyable experience.
I give you a D. But good luck with the weight thing! We all need it.
