3:27 p.m. - 2004-04-14
r-y-r
Hey! Let's review R-Y-R!
Well, she sure is married. And she sure does like to talk about it. A LOT.
Maybe it's because I'm not married and haven't been even close to being married, but I don't get this. It's kinda boring. It's full of how much she loves her husband and how he's her soulmate, and then one minute later she's talking about how she's bored with him and wants more action. Which is typical, sure.. we're never happy with our significant others 100% of the time, but yeah.
You're 24. I'm 24. But I can't relate to you at all. I don't know where you're coming from. Like, this entry. It was powerful, because you and your husband have both experienced losing a loved one to death, and that is not something I see here on D-Land very often. And to have such a different perspective on things, that's really cool.. but it's not something I've gone through, so I couldn't begin to know what you're talking about. Or something.
The point is, I had a hard time really getting into this one. There were quite a few that I skipped around on a few that were just outright boring.
But that's cool. I can see that you have some writing talent in you, and that's cool. Keep it up. Write about something other than your husband once in a while. And rock on.
I give you an 82.
