3:12 p.m. - 2004-05-18
trueangel131
TRUEANGEL131
Well, you get obvious points for living in Austin because, of course, Austin rocks. But other than that...
I wasn't having much enjoyment with this diary. I hate the layout, a lot. White background, first of all. The rest of the crap on there doesn't seem to fit you at all. But hey, if that's what you like, good for you.
Otherwise, I tried to stay interested. This entry struck my interest a little because I really identify with that. Not exactly now, but when I was a teenager I used to hate shit like that. But then there'd be an entry like this one about dances and shopping and Elijah Wood and I'm just like.. ehhh. No thanks. I'll skip that.
And then there's just the sloppy spelling/grammar mistakes that are just plain annoying. Take this entry for example:
"Why is people in the world so mean???Why are kids at my school so hateful??I like Steven.I like him alot.Yeah I know we are dating, but so what.Why does it care so much to them??Why make fun of me or make fun of him.Yes I know there are somethings about him that them insane.I get annoyed also when he says he is so hot, or when he is a basketball star.Believe me I know...I get embrassed when he gets a big eago its Steven."
That's just chock full of mistakes. You should type slower or run your entry through a spell check or something, because it's just distracting.
I want to see more entries like this that actually highlight real and actual emotions and feelings and content, not just talking about the boy of the week and the bathing suit you want to buy.
I realize that you are in your younger years, but that doesn't mean I have to like or want to read your stuff. I didn't see a whole bunch of writing skills just yet. Maybe they're in there somewhere, but you have a lot of work to do. Good luck with all your stuff.
I give you a B-.
